I have started to contemplate the idea to write a history novel. I have written about 8 novels before, but that back in my teens and they are fantasy centered.
I wrote a short fiction history story to train my skills in writing. I will post it here, please tell me your true opinion, I am open to constructive criticism.
I do not have a history degree, but thankfully one is not needed if you want to write history novels. I have made (and continue to do) a lot of research tho.
A Death Sentence
Queen Mary
Tudor I has been ruling England for one year now. She eradicated the Protestant
faith and brought back her beloved Catholicism. She was the grand-daughter of
Isabella De Castile, nicknamed “The Catholic” who brought the Holy Inquisition
in Spain that resulted in the death of over twenty-thousand heretics. The
Queen’s mother was Isabella’s daughter, Kathrine of Aragon and also a fervent
Catholic. The whole of England rejoiced with the ascending of Princess Mary on
the throne. Or so she thought…
Queen Mary
had to gather an army in order to secure the English throne.Her cousin, Lady
Jane Grey was about to be crowned Queen but Mary prevented it, and threw her
and her husband in the Tower. Her advisors constantly tried to persuade her to
execute her cousin, but Mary did not want to bring a 16 years old girl to the
scaffold.
However, the
times have changed…
Such thoughts
passed through the head of the Queen when her chancellor, Bishop Stephen Gardiner
was trying to persuade her how needed the execution of Lady Jane Grey really
was.
- - The
nobles are raising against you, Your Majesty – said he – ever since you
ascended the throne there has been a couple of rebellions by Protestants who
wanted to bring Lady Grey back to the throne, including one revolt by her
father who you ordered to be executed. If Lady Grey continues to live, the
Protestants will rebel until they succeed and dethrone you.
“And behead you” were the final words the man of the cloth
decided to hold back.
Queen Mary was feeling uneasy and vexed. She stood up from
her throne and walked around nervously, holding the cross on her neck.
- - It’s
all that harlot, Anne Boleyn’s fault – said she – If it wasn’t for her, my
father would have never divorced my mother and there would have been no
heretics in England. We would all have
been Catholics, he would have never divorced and I would have become Queen
seven years earlier preventing the death of so many people. But no, she
bewitched him and turned him into the blood-thirsty man he never was. My father
was definitely under a spell for when he bedded Anne, she did not bleed, which
proved she was the Devil’s mistress. How could he believed she was pure while
she was married previously? And so what,
she and her husband did nothing? What a deceiver!
Mary did not mention that her own mother was married before
she married her father and also, like Anne Boleyn, claimed she was a virgin.
The Bishop was weary. He was tired of listening about Anne
Boleyn every time the Queen was angry.
- - Your
majesty, the evil was undone, but it has to be finished. If we take Lady Grey
out of the way, then the Protestants would have no one to fight for.
- - I
cannot bring my 17 years old cousin to the scaffold. If I execute her, the heretics
would find another excuse to rebel. Then I’d have to execute more and more
people until there is no end. I do not want to be remembered like my father who
under Anne Boleyn’s spell was beheading his relatives and closest people.
- - Your
Majesty, the difference with Lady Grey is that she was about to be crowned
Queen when you took action against her. If we get rid of her, the nobles would
have no immediate pretense to rebel. They would be seen as traitors and their
support would be little to none. But now there are a lot of unreasonable barons
who prefer Lady Grey to be Queen.
- - I
did not take any action against her. – cried the Queen – I merely took what was
my birthright – to rule this country. I was the first daughter of my father and
I deserve to be Queen, it is God’s will.
- - Your
Majesty is reasonable; you have secured the throne, almost. With Lady Grey…
- - I
am sick of hearing about Lady Grey. She is of no threat to us in the Tower. I
don’t want to be killing my family, no. I do not wish to be remembered as the
bloodiest Queen of England – Mary sat on her throne with her head titled in her
hand. She was obviously agonized.
To Be Continued…
Author: Stefany Dyulgerova