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    Posted: 13-Sep-2005 at 10:02

In this ad lib piece lets each write a paragraph about this 'fictional' epic. We try to make it appear cohesive and unique yet with a weirdness all our own. One writer's paragraph will set the tone for the next, and so on...

Heres a start. Now I need a title. Hmmm. How about, The Travels of Wang Dang.

 

A long time ago a traveler set forth on his westward journey from his native land. He was a tall slender fellow of esteemed character. Riding on horseback, with his silk gown gently blowing in the hot summer wind, Wang was about to embark on the most important mission of his new career...



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Wand Dang was pondering on his next steps when as if out of nowhere, a huge spaceship landed a few hundred meters in frond of him. As the huge, golden/purple lettered sign on it's side indicated, it was called "Golden Heart". He was considering his changes, of attacking this ugly looking, huge metal structure the size of a small city, with his scimitar - not good, he concluded. As if in a dream, Wand Dang saw a long, slender staircase appearing in the belly of the ship and a two-headed alien, named Zaphod Beeblebrox, an earthling called Trilian and another, apparently pissed-drunk alien named Ford Escort, descended. Don't worry, they told to dumbfounded Wang Dang, we're mostly harmless...

 



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'Amazing!' Wang mused to himself.  'This has got to be the biggest flying object I have ever seen. Well, there was that time my King threw out his overweight attendant off the castle tower', he thought.  'What shall I do? Maybe I will communicate with one of them. Now who should I converse with?'...
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Slowly, but wearily, Wang approached the strange people of the flying object. He showed the strange beings (in particular the two-headed one which seemed to be the leader) the empty palms of his hands, a gesture indicating that he meant no harm. But he did not loosen his scabbard; he wanted them to know that he was prepared to defend himself if necessary. Suddenly, from behind the three strange, strange beings, there emerged a largish man of metal... 
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From Wang's country showing the palms of your hands may look like a courteous gesture , but for the aliens of 'Golden Heart' it could only mean one thing. As the three strange beings obediently bowed in submission the large man in metal came forth.  He appeared to be their leader. He called out to the anxious Wang, "&%^%$Se#%Nor%$." Out of such a gibberish tonque Wang swore he heard something earthly...
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"You must submit to our God, or be eradicated like the heathen you are!" the beigns dictated. Wang was astonished, and frightened at the same time,

"I do not know of your God, nor of anything of your culture and yet you demand I convert?" Wang stated. Yet the aliens from the Golden Heart we're not pleased by such abrupt stubborness...


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Then suddenly out of the blue sky came down another spaceship 10 times the size of the so called "Golden Heart" The space ship shined on the reflection of the sun, it droped down on Wang so fast, that Wang thought, "this may be my last day"

But strangly Wang felt no wind or pressure, as he opened his eyes, and ho the craft was hovering quitely above him, and on the side of the craft came down several two headed aliens all in same attire holding some strange rod connected to the box in their back. "These must be their weapons, they could be their army, man I am really gonna die today" Thought Wang anxiously.

But to Wang's surprise, the two headed alien from the golden heart showed sighs of nervouseness and ran toward his own craft as fast as he could. The one of the uniformed alien with a slightly different looking weapon shot out a huge nest and it captured the other two headed alien.

One unifomed aliean said "Kala of Zansu, you are in numerous violation of first chapter of the inter galactic constitution that any galactic federation or it's citizens should not interfere with the non intelligent life. I here by place you under arrest and you will be sentenced to 500 yrs in jail". Watching all these Wang was dumb founded. One other uniformed alien came flashed a special light in front of Wang.

Sun rose, Wang woke up from a long nights sleep. He thought to him self, "I must hurry to the Tong Shao fort, and tell them of our emperor's plans, and aid General Yang to carry out the will of our beloved emperor Yue Fei.  



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"Get off your ass!"

Alec's mother was never one to be trifled with. Alec groggily pryed himself away from the continuously weird Asian sci-fi flick he had been watching on the TV. "Have you done yer homework?!" the cranky woman glowered at her son before blowing the by-product of her last cigarette drag into his sunken face.

Damned hypocrit, didn't even graduate herself, thought Alec bitterly. "Yea I did it this morning", he humoured the old bag. "Good, then ya can take out the trash and get your ass down to the grocer's to get your mother a bit of libation", said the woman less forcefully as she succeeded her son on the couch groove.

"After what I do tonight you'll be needing as much drink as you can carry, hag", the young man muttered when out of earshot. Tucking the carving knife, a rope and the bag of powder under his coat, he stole into the night.......

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The next morning Alec came back home. Made himself a breakfast and turned on the Tivo connected to his tv. He proceeded to watch the rest of the movie.

Wand, though still in a fog from his strange experience, motioned over to his horse. He grasped the reins, hoped up with speed. Galloping across the barren terrain, he found it imperative to reach the Fort of Tong Shao. Minutes turned into hours. Wang knew that the information he now carries could effect the whole mission. "I'm sure General Yang would love to hear about my recent and bizzare encounter", he thought...

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In the western frontier of the Kai Empire, countless battles were fought between the Kais and the numerous barbarian tribes. Millions have fought, thousands have perished.

Here in Fort Tong Shao and it's surrounding villages, represents the foremost defense of the Kai Empire, Gen. Yang have stationed here for decades, ensureing the safty and the prosperity of the Kai Empire.

In his chamber, Gen. Yang was touching the age old war wound on his shoulder, he remembered the last battle few weeks ago. When he was only a leutinant.

He remebered how he and his commrade fought together to protect each other. The endless swords clash, splinterd shields, and broken spears. Out of these images the most vivid was his Uncle, The Grand General Yang of West Kai Imperial Army, jumped from his horse, ran as fast as he could and shout "Yang Lan, look out!" Lt. Yang looked back and was horrified. It was the barbarian war chief, with long black hair and beard, wraped in animal skin weilding a huge sword. But Lt. Yang was pulled back by Grand Gen. Yang. The sword instead landed on Grand General's other arm and choped it off. Disoriented by the great pain, Grand General lost his stance, and with the second strike the barbarian war chief's sword landed in the the Grand General's helmet, and pierced through. Before the barbarian war chief could react. Lt Yang shouted "nooooooooooooo, uncle" Seeing his beloved uncles head cloven to half, such anger filled with in Lt Yang, he raised his sword and hit as hard as he could on the barbrian sword arm and choped it off. The he moved quickly slashed and stabed as quickly, and as many times as he could.

The war chief fell, the rest of his barbarian troops with no discipline all routed, which resulted in a absolute victory for the Kai Empire. And now Lt. Yang succeeded his Uncle and became the Grand General Yang. Gen Yang could never forget that day.

To the east of not far from Fort Tong Shao, a sentry has spotted a man with light blue uniform on horse back rode as fast as he could toward the Fort. He shouted, "Open the gate, open the gate, the messenger from the Emperor has arrived!"

The news has reached Gen Yang. He got up, bowed in front of the altar, and walked to the walls. Light blue uniform with royal emblem on the vest, golden band on the sleav, and single striped trouser. He must be the Emperor's imperial guard. How strange of the emperor to not sent the royal couriers to carry a message. This guy must be special thought Gen. Yang



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Minarets of incense twist upwards as the curtains are drawn back. Seated and impeccably composed, the General does not raise his eyes to the young man in the blue uniform who had arrived before him in the sumptuous reception room. Laying aside his calligraphy, Yang gently sips the tea. He always takes it bitter, imported from plants which grow on his native Hainan island. These days his face no longer cringes at the taste of it anymore.

Finally he looks up, scuritinizing the guardsman before him. A small and weak chin, thin eyebrows and a rather boyish face; hardly the type of man your typical Imperial Guardsman is meant to look like. But of course Yang knows such elite troops are selected for their talent and skill, not their appearance. The cosmetically daunting yet martially impotent guardsmen of previous generations have been done away with, times such as these allow only a strength which is not hollow.

"Raise your head," Yang commands, and the young man ceases the bow he had been frozen in for the past 10 minutes. "What business have you here?"
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"It is as stated on the imperial document Grand General Yang" Said Wang Dang.

The General sensed nervousness on the yang man's voice and decided to soft a little down. He think he must put his uncle's death in the past for He now commands the West Imperial Army of Kai, he has to get his act together.

To the yong man still as if he is frozen, the gernal said, "Grand General? Haha, yong man, you can just call me General Yang. I am sorry if I scared you a little, you know what war can do to a man. Come now tell me your name and what of your rankings?".

Little relaxed now, the yong man said, "My unworthy name is Wang Dang, General Yang. I am the Captain of the 12th division of the imperial guard, stationed at the west gate of our glorious captial, and General Yang, the document has all the info..."

Before Wang could finishe the General interrupted, "I know well of that Cap. Wang, I never really liked to read the imperial document."

The general is well aware of the pompous attitude of the administrative officials especially those of the imperial city. Unlike martial officicials who were consice decisive and right to the point. The administrative officals were full articles with grand words and big vocabularies. They never get to the point but worries of how to make their articles more beautiful with their esoteric dictions and evasive arguments. Drafting imperial orders has become a literature contest among the administrative officials.

The General continued, "The emperor sent you, his own guards instead of the couriers, this message must be very special, and you must know some detail Cap. Wang. Will you do me a favor of saving me some time, and... you know I am not very well versed in literature..."



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While all of this was happening, god was viewing the cosmos he created. he viewed the stars and the universe, all of the beings within it too. his gaze could concentrate on trillions of things at once. but at the moment, it was all concentrated on earth and a almost blashpemous sci-fi chinease flick. "ugh! is this how lousy things have gotten? look at that alec kid! watching that riciculous sci-fi film. that has got to be the worst film in the world! it had no plot and the ending didnt even match the movie. why did even allow that movie to come into creation? well, better do away with it now". and with a concentration with his mind, god blew up the show that alec was watching.

"hey what happened?!", Alec yelled as his tv exploded.

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the next morning....

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... a fish jumped on THE KING HIMSELF, Elvis, and had a vision. A strange vision, involving scantily clad women and men in overalls... 
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Alex awoke from his strange dream of elvis and the fish...and the scantily clad women....to find his tv still broken. "dammit! nothing good ever happens around here".
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